ShopDreamUp AI ArtDreamUp
Deviation Actions
Literature Text
The world was bored in monotone
and colored black and white
My life slipped right by me
until you set it right
You brought your crayons with you
You colored in my life
A masterpiece in colored wax
My world had no more strife
With no regard for thick black lines
You scribbled as you pleased
Although it wasn't Vince van Gogh
It turned out perfectly
I marveled in my rainbow world
I sang out vibrant tones
I loved the magic you had worked
Upon my weary bones
Then I lived forever after
and forever more
My life was a mile better
when you walked through my door
and colored black and white
My life slipped right by me
until you set it right
You brought your crayons with you
You colored in my life
A masterpiece in colored wax
My world had no more strife
With no regard for thick black lines
You scribbled as you pleased
Although it wasn't Vince van Gogh
It turned out perfectly
I marveled in my rainbow world
I sang out vibrant tones
I loved the magic you had worked
Upon my weary bones
Then I lived forever after
and forever more
My life was a mile better
when you walked through my door
I wrote this in French class. Then John accidentally ripped it up after school.
Edit: Now there's a sequel... Monochrome World
Edit: Now there's a sequel... Monochrome World
© 2007 - 2024 whisperinthetrees
Comments42
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
lol...he accidentally ripped it up? xDDDDDDD How the hell does that happen?
Sorry, had to get that out of the way. But anyway. I don't know much about poetry, but good work. Did you get that idea from the poster in the computer lab?
Sorry, had to get that out of the way. But anyway. I don't know much about poetry, but good work. Did you get that idea from the poster in the computer lab?